rain brings grass
grass brings deer
deer our glee
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rain brings grass
grass brings deer
deer our glee
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Got question Bruce: in first two lines, verb and object in direct linkage; last line verb-object linkage split by “our.” Is appropriate to whyask? Just a matter of flow, but I dunno the design.
Reblogged this on richwrapper and commented:
Asked I after the last line just a minorly nibblequibble for such a full-plated poem. May I read as if the raised letters were printed on a great wheel revolving across some deerful greensward.
Last line too heavy
As usual you compress so much in your inrantations
I have showoff fingers.