400/s


shimmering above
waves of glistening water
waves of long white wings

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2 thoughts on “400/s

  1. I puzzle, Grasshopper Herder: is it kosher to use waves in succeeding lines? Not just asking but wondering what – or which line – may be asking for a change. The juxtapositioning of same world doing different work mildly disturbing this ancient grubber in your patch, but your possible solution to my dilemma may make emma less dil.

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